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... after we'll die ...

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Wild Horses

Childhood living is easy to do

The things you wanted I bought them for you
Graceless lady you know who I am

You know I can't let you slide through my hands

 Wild horses couldn't drag me away
Wild, wild horses couldn't drag me away

 I watched you suffer a dull aching pain
Now you've decided to show me the same

No sweeping exit or offstage lines
Could make me feel bitter or treat you unkind

Wild horses couldn't drag me away

Wild, wild horses couldn't drag me away
I know I've dreamed you a sin and a lie

I have my freedom but I don't have much time
Faith has been broken tears must be cried

Let's do some living after we'll die

 Wild horses couldn't drag me away
Wild, wild horses we'll ride them some day

Wild horses couldn't drag me away

Wild, wild horses we'll ride them some day

- Keith Richards, Mick Jagger -

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Image size
2592x1944px 1.08 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-HX400V
Shutter Speed
1/320 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Sep 14, 2015, 2:03:57 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Very well thought out shot both with the exposure and the sharpness of the photo. The only thing and it's a minor thing to critique on is how the exposure has this very strong Darkness on the left side of photo. The lighting is pretty well balanced throughout the photo. The reason I call attention to that element is because it develops what some refer to as a distraction point. That is a point of the photo that calls attention away from the main theme or topic of the photo. When someone looks at the picture and they see this quick change in color immediately the eyes are drawn to it so much that you forget to interpret the photo as a whole verses the point. I rated you perfect on Vision and Originality because this isn't a photo I've seen before and the lighting for the most part is spot on. and there is a very strong impact with the picture as a whole. You did a great job, keep up the good work and continue taking more cool shots <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>